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oh my im confused.
i dont see a poem? maybe im just stupid... you mean the background like break all the rules? -
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just a couple of them...!
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witty.
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had this thought when thinking about Beethoven's last pieces...
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One line - a punch in the poem! I like the answer written in the background, but even after reading the comments below, I agree with them but agree with you - break sounds better. But perhaps something different, even an alliteration with 'rules' would probably sound and flow smoothly.
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now you're thinking creatively... hmmm... alliteration... how about 'rip the rules'... but then I just read that a true poet has no need to be poetic... but yes, Madison Ave. and Hollywood and all... packaging is a part of the whole picture...! (and what are poetic devices but pretty packaging?) I liked that recent AP quote of the day- "information points to other things, a poem points only to itself"... I wonder how that fits in...
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Renounce the rules?
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rub the rules?
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not to break them
that's only rebellion
to completely forget they exist -
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well, there you go, you already broke the first rule... lol
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that's why it's called constructive coment and not poetry
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it?
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is a comment
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Or at least forget about the rules. If your creativity happens to end up fitting 'the rules' that's ok too.
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thanks, yes, I considered saying 'disregard all the rules' but that didn't have any 'bite'... lol although that is closer to the truth...
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