I gave myself over
to a comedy of horrors
as you tried
and failed
to ring my bell.
Author notes
You are the bell and I am the tongue ringing in you.
- Melina Marchetta.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie NOWWW baby!! # 35 by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended October 28, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ah, another young person in the
lings 
I hadn't seen you around -- so it is a good thing
that I am coming on this comment wave
You have captured the prompt in pure brilliance,
and what a vivid image you create.
I am glad to see you have been rewarded properly
congratulations on your trophy
Best wishes,
lings Zach Estel
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Wonderful. There's a 'dong' joke in there somewhere.
-The Manatee
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Haha. I don't know why this just made me think of someone who's had realllllly bad sex... Poor soul!
Some people should just be banned from "doing it" ever again; like my ex-boyfriend.
Congrats on the well-deserved silver; I love your poetry, & you. ♥
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lots of congrats on the silver trophy.
seems like someone fails to "ring your bell". gotta hate it when they fake people try to act that way with you and think they can get away with it. nice write. great job!
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Oh gosh, Chels... what are you doing writing stuff like this????? LOL, too funny.
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Nicely done, congrats on the silver!
~ Tim
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A comedy of horrors - that's is wonderful!!! I loved this - short and too the point!!!
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oh ice cold.
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I really am going to have to visit your work outside a contest. It is just fantastic.
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hehe - oh; I adore this!
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The moon has grown.
I like.
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"comedy of horrors" --> brilliance
love that part; love this whole piece!
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