You shouted at me, yelled really loud
"you are no good"
"I don't need you"
But an hour later you were
Yelling
my name
In ~Pleasure~
Author notes
You are the bell and I am the tongue ringing in you.
A contest entry
- Quickie NOWWW baby!! # 35 by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended October 28, 6 entries
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Comments
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Wow.
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This reminds me of a much shorter version of Bukowski's Hunk of Rock. I like.
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yeah well!! this is just perfect!!
and most truthfully penned
love and blessings
Rend
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Aaaaggghh!......the Liberty Bell is cracked. This poem resonated in various different ways, my friend. Telling someone they are no good and not needed doesn't leave much incentive to ring your chimes. And I think of another poem, too, For Whom the Bell Tolls. Life is short enough.
Smart man, didn't I send you a little poem about circles? I don't know who wrote it, but it is copyrighted.
"He drew a circle
and left me out
heretic, rebel,
a thing to flout
But Love and I
had the wit to win ~
We drew a circle
and took him in!"
K 
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Well played. Well played. -The Manatee
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hehehehe.
oooh sounds like one of those Fight and Make-up sex scenarios. fantastic
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Emma,
It's not good to go to bed mad at each other.
Thanks for reading.
Joe
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why am i blushing??? LOL
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Daizee Girl
Great to see you read me again. You blushing?? good.
Thanks sweet one.
Joe
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wow. Strong one.
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Rowan
we know the truth don't we. lol
Thanks for reading,
Joe
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Woohoo.. told you you're 'da man'
Go get em tiger hehe Best of luck on an excellent write!
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Linda,
thanks
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Loved it. To say so much in so few words is real talent. Excellent observation about life and cleverly stated.
ivoire
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ivoire
Thanks, You are too sweet.
Joe
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wow grandpa sad but good poem in -Pleasure- in the way i think you meant it either way this poem was good it was kinda short and i feel you left something out thanks for sharing keep up the great work
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serenity
Thanks sweetheart. You are good to your grandpa.
I appreciate you reading.
Joe
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haha...so true!...grrrrowl!
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Catie,
Life's funny -no?
Thanks for reading.
Joe
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oooh loved the ending! 'joe, Joe, JOE!! Oh! OH!.....'
lmao....
great job!
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G.I.
You rock! ... Thanks for reading.
Joe
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Isn't making up great?! LOL...I loved this one Joe.
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Bells,
Just trying to write, it ain't gonna be easy.
Appreciate you reading/comenting.
Joe
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Haha! Sure showed her!!
This is great!
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Stef
Thanks for reading. I appreciate it.
Joe -
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Pleasure was all mine
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I'm sorry, I can be fickel. You can spank me.
Love,
Amera
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oh boy-oh boy!
Joe
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lmao...
its so basic. But it made me chuckle...!
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sexy
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It's not good , but it was fast.
I am off to read yours.
Joe
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I don't know why you say you're not good at quickies, you write good poetry in them. This is good.
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Thank you. It sucks. lol
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