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This World

This world so cold,
It reigns down on me;
Nothing to hold,
I can clearly see.

She goes away,
And says "I'll be back;"
I question her ways,
And add them to my stack.

This world so dark,
Creeping to my core;
Extinguishing this spark,
I can see no more.

Days pass by,
The day soon comes;
I sit down and cry,
There is no remorse.

Tears stream down my face;
"Why does This World hate me so?"

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  • Vampyrecutter
    November 4

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    every time i read your poems i just love them more and more i think you're very talented. even if they are always dark and sad. so are mine for the most part.