Storyteller,
Will you read to me once more?,
Read to me the story of the cat who thinks he is a dog,
Storyteller,
You take my mind to a faraway land,
Where no saddness or bad thoughts can reach me,
Where a land has two moons,
And elves hide in the trees,
Storyteller,
I love you,
Though you hurt,
You read to me,
And save me from my mind,
Storyteller,
Tell me a story again, please?
Or perhaps tonight i'll read to you,
My Storyteller,
My Istar,
My Gwyneth,
My Silvera
My Rukia,
My moon....
I've got an important thing to tell you...
I love you
Author notes
She always reads to me. Those moments i find solace cause its like im on an adventure.
I wrote this as a tribute to her.
So melissa? Read to me again tonight? Please?
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A very interesting write. I love how you use the idea of a story teller to portray the person in question. The imagery you've placed forward is interesting and engaging to the reader. The idea of two moons goes hand in hand with a different coloured sky, giving the reader a deeper view into this world. The language fits together well and it flows quiet nicely. A very enjoyable read.
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of course, ill find more stories to read to you tonight.
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What delicate, beautiful words! A heart warming piece that I know for sure made her smile. As usual, superb piece, Victor!
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Awww, this is beautiful! I loved the way you have brought out the beauty of stories "You take my mind to a faraway land," beautiful tribute to your storyteller
touching piece!
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