pressure peers
upon pariahs of pubescence
and actions uncommon
bare the bravado of boys;
yet he licks Listerine
before greeting his mother...
Author notes
Prompt;
He's getting pissed with
the rest of the local eighteen.
He;s telling racist
and sexist jokes.
There's a restraining order on him,
but he was just drunk, and anyway
she was asking for it.
He hates boongs and
he hates faggots
and if a girl wont suck his dick
she's a lesbian.
Still,
he's a nice guy
once you get to know him.
- Adam Ford.
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- Quickie NOWWW baby!!! # 34 by Mango Memories.
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Comments
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This tied my tongue, even when read silent!
Nicely done & congrats on the Silver!
~ Tim
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'yet he licks listerine before greeting his mother...'
does it get any better than that? you nailed this one ...
congrats on the shiny....!
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Brilliant
Oh yes!!!
Short and not so sweet yet speaks the language of teens and those who pour the golden nectar..
Think I know a few of them
Well done on your silver
Julie
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is it wrong I chuckled at the final part?
probably
I tend to react the wrong ways;
but I fudging love this
'grats on the Silver!
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Killer ending. really good!!
Joe
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last stanza did it for me.
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Che!
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This is really good. Loved the last lines.
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