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Paper-balls.






and so she watched from the back of the classroom
the school-yard jock and couldn't help
to think if anyone else noticed that his
irises matched the sky.














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Prompt;



He's getting pissed with
the rest of the local eighteen.
He;s telling racist
and sexist jokes.
There's a restraining order on him,
but he was just drunk, and anyway
she was asking for it.
He hates boongs and
he hates faggots
and if a girl wont suck his dick
she's a lesbian.
Still,
he's a nice guy
once you get to know him.



- Adam Ford.

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  • Sir Squigglim
    October 28
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    Now we've noticed.
    ♥


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 28

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    intriguing; I like this ...
    almost too much to know why

    'grats on the Bronze


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 28

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    This is a well put together & concise take on the prompt.

    Me likey.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    October 28

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    Veery good short form. We were on the same wave pattern.
    Joe.


  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 28
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    Bravo!


  • Naridill gold member
    October 28

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    Awwww; sugar coated


  • February Moon gold member
    October 28

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    O.m.g. I absolutely loved this.

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