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Lovers on the cusp

Thoughts embroidered with love and memories.
She wanted love over life and his sweet presence over cold absence.

He drank champagne from a broken cup and peered through windows at disrobed bodies; searching for someone he had once known.

Within one night they were both visited by the redeemer with a glass that was filled with light.
He begged them both to drink...

Neither thirsted for light
only the lack thereof

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 10
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    beautiful words penned here,
    love and blessings

    Rend

  • bijoux
    November 6

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    ooo...this is very nice, you left me as the reader contemplating...always a good thing...the imagry is really good too!