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Just An Hour

I want to write a new song
One no one can take wrong
With words that have a magic power
To give the world one peaceful hour
I'm not asking for a miracle
Just an hour take a minute or so
When nobody gets their head caved in
When nobody has to lose
So someone else can win
Just an hour
A fraction of time
A billionth of a billionth of a second
In the scheme

 

chael 09

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A contest entry

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  • whitecoffee
    November 7
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    I totally enjoyed this, especailly the last lines. Tnanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 6
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    BRAVO...BRAVO...AND BRAVO AGAIN...THIS IS WONDERFUL
    T


  • evershine-90
    October 29

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    For an hour, a world of peace without sadness, a very mesmerizing poem. peace, a hard thing to picture in the current scenario the world is in, i love that you are writing about it and in a very beautiful way. great work!


  • FreedomsVoice
    October 28

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    You forgot to put you option in the authors notes Thats ok though, they really were just there to inspire, not set strict guidelines.
    I have to say I agree with what you put forth here, its hard to believe we spend more shipping guns/ammo/bombs/tanks than we do to educate our youth. Personally, I treasure every second of peace I can get, even though I know it will never last

    Thanks for entering!