Tanned October leaves
blown into heaps against trees -
Autumn detritus.
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Yes!
Love it! 
Tanned leaves...they do seem to be don't they? U R such an original! I see you're rhyming your Ku! 
detritus? 
Latin scholar eh? 
As always...well done. 
BTW....just looked up the word detritus. Fine word. 
for this!
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Detritus is indeed from a Latin root, but it is a fairly common word. Well, it is in England anyway. The rhyme was accidental.
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Very effective imagery!
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dappled in shadows
interstices of autumn
caught in the branches
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wind blown carpeting
a mosaic of burnished bronze
underneath my feet
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