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Sometimes

Sometimes, I feel a connection
between myself and pure evil

Sometimes, I hear the voice of Satan
calling out my name

It's a telling sign
when you identify with the villain in the horror movie

When you swallow pills like candy
to make the bad thoughts go away

Sometimes, I want to be the killer
and drive the knife right through your heart

Sometimes, I want to be the monster
that I keep locked inside

I want to escape the Doctor's lab
to go on a rampage
and terrorize the town's people with my freakish form

Sometimes, I want to destroy,
to smash your most precious keepsakes
to drag it all to the ground

Sometimes, I just want to watch the world burn

Author notes

Wrote it after watching Orphan... it's not great, I know. I only spent a couple minutes on it. It's more about me than the movie, I think.

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  • kenny-streetcrazy
    November 18
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    Wow. This is morbidly marvelous. It has an embrace of the inside darkness. But I hope you stay alright, I really do. You are one hell of a woman.

  • mcfreeman
    November 10
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    I like this....

    touches the dark side...nicely done.

  • JToddUnderhill
    October 27

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    Ok...

    .... I didn't think that it was a bad piece I liked it because we have all felt that way from time to time. I don't hear the voice of Satan... Thats because she's at home with my kids and I am at work .... Doh!

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