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My Creative Genius Has Abandoned Me

My creative genius has abandoned me
Left me cold and hollow inside
Like the shell of a once lavish home
Decayed by time, leaving only stone

My creative genius has abandoned me
Left me poor and barren
This home used to be full of activity
Now nothing is here

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  • HaleyMary
    October 28

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    Powerful write, but creativity doesn't necessarily disappear forever. It may take a hiatus, but is likely to return in the future. Try picking up a new hobby, read some books, and you might get inspired by the most unexpected thing. Good luck with finding inspiration.


  • Hourglass Sand
    October 27

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    Brilliance doesn't just go away, it is still there. u just have to find it again. Sometime all u need is some new. Something that u would allow yourself to use your intelligence.