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Even You Will Die

You may have large muscles
But you are not invincible
You can not dodge bullets
You have no wings to fly
You brag about your strength
But even you will die

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  • FactoryMadePuppet
    October 29
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    I think this is one of your better poems that I have seen so far. It's very strong


  • HaleyMary
    October 28

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    Powerful write. Death isn't something a lot of people like to think about, but it's true, the human body is so fragile and life can be blown out as soon as it begins. Thanks for sharing a thought provoking piece and keep that pen flowing.