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It's a really heartfelt poem,
it's beautiful, but it's cold.
It's ruthless.

It's the kind of poem
that jumps out at you when you're guilty.

It ensnares,
it traps,
it reaches,
it feels.
We, the readers
...we feel.

It's the poem that is a light,
you know the kind of light that illuminates,
that forces you out of the darkness,
that shines upon your evil deeds.
It's that kind of light they use to interrogate.

It's the
kind of light that
sets you
free.

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This is a rant I thought of when commenting on a poem. Creative, eh?

What is it? Thought provoking?

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