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I Am.. Me.

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i am..
heavens fallen grace,
an angel of disgrace,
living as a lie,
hoping to one day feel
like i'm alive..

but until then..

i am..
a shadow of who i used to be,
my heart caged, wishing to fly free,
lying to my own soul,
hoping to one day
again be whole..

but until then..

i am..
your forced smile,
your broken heart,
your empty eyes,
your hollow part..

shattered pieces of you..
some day soon i know i will be through..
through with you..

i am..
your forced smile,
your broken heart,
your empty eyes,
your hollow part..

your fallen tears,
your silent laugh,
the fragile pieces of your past..


but not any more..

i have escaped
my heart released,
flying free,
through with you
i am in glee..

i am me.

no longer living as a lie,
instead today i'm flying high,
my heart free.
i am me.

Grace.

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sorta song-ish, but mostly just about how i'm stuck in my past but working on moving on.
what do you think?

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  • Silences Voice
    October 28

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    Amazing

    "i am..
    your forced smile,
    your broken heart,
    your empty eyes,
    your hollow part..

    your fallen tears,
    your silent laugh,
    the fragile pieces of your past.. " This is my favorite part. I absolutely love this poem. Very very nicely done.


  • Shakes-spear
    October 28

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    So it goes, so it goes.....

    We all have things in our past that we wish to be free of. They are different for everyone, but still they haunt us. They don't have to though. No one can make you lie to yourself. You need to decide where you want to be and make a plan to get there. Do what is best for you! ( if there are children involved, they must take first place, but that does not mean you have to be someone other than yourself.) You are a young woman and your life is before you. I did not really start living life til I was 32. Don't be like me! (parents want better for their children...even APDads!) You should be happy and you can be. I like the thought that you are Flying high and have a free heart. Now go and get what you want out of life. I didn't say it would be easy...just that YOU can do it! I believe in YOU!
    The Shaker

    • Fallen Grace silver member
      October 28
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      I understand what you mean about "you need to decide where you want to be and make a plan to get there" I really do need to start deciding things for my life and I know I constantly change my mind a lot but I seem to end up back at the same place. I am happy too for the most part and my hubby helps me out with everything he can. I need to learn to believe in myself though. That is my main problem. But yeah, I am doing my best lol
      Thanks for the boost of confidence ^ - ^


  • Hope Angel silver member
    October 27

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    This is really well written sissy. And I like you no matter if your head is in the past or moving. I love you

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