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Recess!

Conglomerates on grassy knolls
Will laugh and play til the bed does toll
What wonders lie here, far from rules
Let people dance, let dogs drool

This land has fallen from the grid
No egos allowed, just bring your id
No paper work or pressured games
Just be yourself upon this plane

We've won this day
Let's have our way
At the local park
Leave smiles as marks
On this sacred land
Where we raise our hands
In joy as we dance
Lost in a playful trance

Recess for all
Recesses of society
Recess of the self
Find that kid again
And let it fly for this time

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