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My Standpoint On Life

cast down your sword
usher in a new age of music and love
forget all or your past feuds
and leave your heart in their place
for music and love are one
hand in hand
without one the other could not survive
without either neither would i or could i survive as well

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  • xeroabyss II
    October 28

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    If only...such a future utopian daydream.

    It would be nice, if all just klearned to get along and be civil to each other.

    Too bad people don't actually follow what their religions preach of...along with their religions not sanctifying the murder of those who are not with the program.

    Anyhell, nice poem.

    -cheers to peace


    • loudlady
      October 28
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      thanks!

      i kow its so terrible that no one can ever get along my dad always told me "things in this world are set up in a way where the rich man keeps getting richer and the poor get poorer" its quite terrible but thats the society that we live in

      • xeroabyss II
        October 30
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        Yeah, such is the world we exist in.


        • loudlady
          November 3
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          i know what you mean man

          seriously i know and unfortuneately the majority of our world is suffering from it but i know i can find comfort in my music i just feel srry for those who do not have a fix

          • xeroabyss II
            November 3
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            There's always music.


            • loudlady
              November 7
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              yeah

              music kamelot- love you to death poetry- annabelle lee
              movie- the illusionist friend- my opposite sex twin dan ( we are so alike its scary sometimes... if i got mabey 2 of those things at all times i can stay sane


              • xeroabyss II
                November 9
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                Im happpy that im lucky enough to always have the music.
                Tis actually the one good thing in existance i can't fuck up....unless I manage to accidentally (or negligently) destroy my ears


                • loudlady
                  November 9
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                  aww

                  awww damn i know what you mean honestly im already going deaf and im what now 14 lols probably not a good idea to listen to children of bodom on full volume... sitting right near the spakers


                  • xeroabyss II
                    November 9
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                    Well, as long as you're not doing it 24/7 you'll still have hearing into your 30's


                    • loudlady
                      November 9

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                      cool

                      cool i like that idea hearing is one of my fave things without hearing i couldnt listen to kamelot or sonata arctica which would completely suck and i might just have to go suicide if i couldnt hear

                      • xeroabyss II
                        November 9
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                        Could always get into reading, since you'll have all the quiet


                        • loudlady
                          November 9
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                          haha

                          read i already read fervently but the quiet im not a fan of i absolutely hate quiet which is the only reason why i hate writing tests cause being the quiet it kinda makes me nervous


                          • xeroabyss II
                            November 9
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                            HA!
                            Wait til you never get a chance for peace and quiet, you'll find a new appreciation for it


                            • loudlady
                              November 9
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                              mabey

                              possibly but there has always been something about the quiet that scares me especially since my uncle lawrence died i figure ill here enough quiet when im dead i dont need it now

  • Coldwater
    October 28

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    Hey! enjoyed, very "seventies" thoughts, but appropriate for any age.
    Regards.

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