I walked a thousand miles on this road of "destiny"
I feel as if I am not getting anywhere in life
That everything you said was a twisted lie
Just to see me smile once more
My heart beat feels faded
As if my heart beat no longer exist
The meaning of my happiness
Washed away within the current of the ocean waves
I've been doing nothing but
Walking in stupid circles for hours
I'm growing tired and
The confusion is building within my mind
The silences grow more cold and
My feelings start to sink into
A state of mind of
Endless depression...
Many miles I walked
A thousand miles of
Broken dreams
That I never got to reach in life...
Broken & Shattered
Like crystal-clear glass
A broken mirror cannot
Show the reflection of yourself
Without all the pieces being together
As one...
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I could feel the emotions you laced into every stanza. Excellent imagery and great word choice. I enjoyed this piece and think that more people should read it! Excellent write and thank you for sharing!
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I am glad you enjoyed it. Your words truly mean a lot to me
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Very Very excellent Poem I love it, I wish I was as creative as you
you have a very Amazing imagination if I could i'd give it 10 stars
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Awe thank you for your kind words Josh ^^
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You are very welcome Sophia
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*I like this part*
I walked a thousand miles on this road of "destiny"
I feel as if I am not getting anywhere in life
That everything you said was a twisted lie
Just to see me smile once more
Aww what happen????
If u need someone to talk to im here!
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