You've given up. Think love has let you down.
It, too's a victim of this same mis-use.
Within this circus life don't be a clown,
it was from the man and not love you got abuse.
~CHORUS~
Love in the night is easy.
You know it's something any fool could do.
Don't close your eyes to what you see.
Come step into the light,
forget about the night
and I'll show you a love that's true.
I can give you all the love that you want.
Will you give me all the love that I need.
If you think this trip can be a short jaunt,
then you don't understand, girl, it's my soul that you feed.
~CHORUS~
Love in the night is easy.
You know it's something any fool could do.
Don't close your eyes to what you see.
Come step into the light,
forget about the night
and I'll show you a love that's true.
~TAG~
Come step into the light,
I can fill your day and night,
with a love that's forever true.
Author notes
This is another song I have written. The Scopions sing "No One Like You". I wanted to do one as well as that. I guess I keep trying.
A contest entry
- Spill Forth Your Heart And Love. by Poetryintheblood.
900 points, ended October 29, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What are your first thoughts?
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Great lyrics. Such a truth, love is great, it's the people that will hurt you. Or sometimes that you hurt, not meaning to but it happens. I hear some Kris in your lyrics. His voice is unmistakable. Hope you have a lot of luck. I seem to be at a dead spot right now. Trying to hard, I think.
Congrats on the Silver. Well deserved.
Sharon
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nice song. i like the encouragement found in the lines, particularly the chorus.
nicely done.
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Thanks Rick!
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Beautifully done, I was singing along to it and that makes for a good song, thank you for entering and good luck, Josie
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Thank you, Josie
Thanks for the contest and the silver. I hope one day you will be singing this on the radio...well not you but singing WITH the radio while this song is playing.
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wow this is really beautiful. this is the first of your work that i have ever read and i am encouraged to read more
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Great.
Tell me what you like and I can point you in the right direction. I'll have to stop by as well. Thank you for reading and the encouragement.
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This is a good song hun. And I guess I wasn't reading much cause I needed to see this after the last few days. Thank you for the read. And much hope on your contest even though You don't need it. Well written.
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Sounds like it helped.
It was meant to. Women think love let them down but it didn't. Love is a tool. Men let them down with the tool they were given to comfort. Men use it to inflict pain, sometimes on purpose, sometimes not. Eitherway, don't give up on love! Find someone else who can do it better!! Thank you, Hun!
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it is sooo singable
and a love song
beautifully done!!!!!!!!!!!!
God bless you my friend..
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Seems to be the only two I crank out...
love songs or children's church. That's ok though. As long as my friends enjoy them...of course some are wanting me to sing, now, but that is just because they haven't heard me. LOL Thank you for your encouragement.
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I don't know the songs you mention or the tune so a bit hard to read as trying to read as a poem. I too would like to hear it sung to get a better idea. I have tried to write country songs but they are usually ballad form as unless I have a tune in my head that's the way they come out.. I can't write music or create new tunes
good luck with the contest
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Thank you.
I have written a few songs now. I get hung up on the tune as well. If I'm not careful, they all sound the same...LOL And so it goes.
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I can see it now.. ''And the Grammy goes to.... There is no end to your talent is there young man? Love it!!! Now all we need is a mic so you can sing it Seriously, it's truly beautiful. Sigh.
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I've sang it to myself....
so many times I am starting to think I've heard it on the radio...for real and for true. I haven't found an end to my talent yet but I wouldn't say there isn't one. Thank you so much for the encouragement. It and you mean alot to me.
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Not familiar with the other one, but I like this one. Would like to hear it as well.
Very good.
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I'd like to have them sung as well.
Working on that! I haven't found an artist who is starving enough yet. But I will...at least I hope I will.
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