Her boyfriend.
My ex
Came to watch our game
I screamed in her face
And slammed every door on my way out
I kicked the garbage can, into the parking lot
Then I pulled up my skirt
And peed in her parking spot
It was the most regressive, yet liberating
Thing I could do.
And I much as I hate him
As jealous as I am of her
I did it all because… I still love him.
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- Everyday Life III by Matt E. Smith.
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Awesome
Oh women and how they find ways to show their love is still alive .Good write here
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Ayer! Lol, the emotion is unrelenting, thank these caring actions. Lol wierd but I feel in love with the character this has. So YoOo the makings of wife materials:"I screamed in her face
And slammed every door on my way out
I kicked the garbage can, into the parking lot"...
'Nother good read! -
good imagery/ write!!
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yeah love makes us do a lot of peeing I find
fun write!
Em
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thanks =)
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ahhh...it is always that sort of paradox.
haha the image of you pissing on the parking spot was funny in my head. I saw some crazy hippy chick (no offense
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thanks for entering
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i was on a WARPATH. idk what that poor girl said to me, but i lost, i think the best part was hearing the absolute silence as a walked out of the locker room. not one person spoke and i threww the door opein into the wall, and then to the two sophomores i was driving home, i was like LETS GO. so i kicked a garbage can with my broken toes all the way outside of the school, and pulled down my spandex, and pulled up my skirt and just peed. it was ridiculous and i laughed this like insane laguh because it felt so good. like it sounds so crazy, but it was so liberating, and then i carried the garbage can tothe street, sat in the leaves leaning up agaist the stone wall, covered myself with my blanket and just smoked a bogee with my friends, best/ worst day ever. i felt the need to share this with you. =)
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Lifted your skirt and peed on her parking space?
You hooligan!!!
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Roxy
If you're American when you go into the bathroom,
And you're American when you come out,
What are you while you're in there?
Eur-a-peein!
I'm afraaaaiiiidddd of you! Remind me not to get on your bad side!LOL
Nice poem!
John
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haha i'm pretty sure this qualifies for mental issues lol. but omgg it felt so good. like iwas just so angryyyyyyy. i remember this sleepover i had in 4th grade when my friend ellie told me to piss out my frustration i'm pretty sure that's exactly what i did lmaoo.
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