If earth was a person it's head would be made up of
all the gutters and violence.
The head would be placed on
the barren battlefield of the nuclear wars.
All the ashes of this barren wasteland form together to create
a beautiful Pheonix.
The burnt trees would grow a new.
The waters would run clear.
The breeze would blow near.
The streets of the USA would be scorched
by the hatred of others.
The sky would turn black with all of our pollutions.
The few survivors would wish they weren't.
would you wish you weren't
part of our future?
A contest entry
- Options Contest by Sonya-Erasmus.
1000 points, ended November 6, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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A dark view of mankind for sure....yeah, the earth would stand against a nuclear war, she renews herself...It sounds like the End of Days....Judgement-day...most are trapped in cycles of violence yeah...
(Pheonix---> Phoenix) Nicely done. Thank you for entering the contest.
Erwin
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Wow, well done!
Great imagery and I like the sudden twist.
Great job.
Thanks so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Hugs
Sonya
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