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Miracles Expressed

 

 

Catch the breath of a firefly

breathe it out to the wind

take flight on a dream

release the flame within

 

Whisper Wings to a maiden fair

soar with Eagles majestic air

walk the path of our ancestors

proud warrior for our people

 

The miracle of life

is realized in the birth of

expression

 

 

 

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  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    November 16
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    Tammy, this poem has such depth of feeling. As a parent I could relate to every word. Nothing truly prepares us for the immensity of the love and responsibility that we have when our child is born. We think we are prepared, but it is so much more than we imagined. Your daughter is very fortunate to have you as her loving mother. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz


  • Nickelspring gold member
    November 1

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    I loved the imagery in the freeverse- so free and light.
    The Ottava Rima touches my heart deeply- those last 2 lines summed it up!
    Nicely done!
    Best wishes,
    K


  • patriciarose07
    October 28

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    This is cool!

    I like this poem you have created. Thanks for sharing as I feel that expressing one's inner thoughts without any structure is another way to get it out to the public.


  • morningstar1948 gold member
    October 27

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    You learn from the lesson I tught

    You use it to better it to fix for those to under stand it.
    As I always told you listen to me and learn and you will be the best one to carried on for me. You did a beautiful poem here
    my daughter. Congratateion.
    Love
    mom


  • WisdomWarrior
    October 27

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    Wow... very deep sis. The miracle of life trully is realized in the birth of expression. Very well penned.

    One Love,

    John
    a.k.a. WisdomWarrior

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