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Halloween Night

The darkness envelopes
Sending the world into darkness
The moon a nightime sun
Eluminates the shadows
On this night
THe tricks and the treats are passed out generously
With witches, vampire and other creatures of the night
Becareful for everything has a nasty bite
I bright burning jack-o-latern
Sitting on a porch looking creepy
This halloween night is time for the scare of your life

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