My dog waits nearby,
intently watching each move,
as I flip pancakes.
Author notes
Brief snippet of senryu. I should mention that the image is something I sketched for the poem, lest anyone think I didn't provide proper attribution. 
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A cute senryu.
I miss having my puppies
and my kitties, lol.
This is sweet;
you've captured a wonderful little moment.
We have millions of them, but never appreciate them
until it's too late.
Thanks for sharing,
Zach Estel.
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hahahahaha. awww your lovely doggy wants some breakfast. this made me smile.
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AWWWWW
You wrote a haiku about my own dog, Marshal....he sits patiently (sometimes) waiting for a tidbit...so cute...Good luck in the contest...
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This is too too cute. I bet your dog is just hopin' for a pancake to fly his way.
Good luck in the contest
Lady Dragonwyck
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That one made me laugh and smile for a while! Very good luck in the contest!
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