An ocean of grass
Waved by the wind
Under a clear sky,
The flowers are bursting with color
As we run through the meadow
We are filled wth pure joy
Seeing all the life
Seeing the beauty around us
We see what nature has to offer
We see the beauty of nature
Author notes
what do you think?!?!?!
i am thinking of putting this in the reflection contest.
the theme this year for the contest is "beauty is....."
is it a good poem?
A contest entry
- prewrites, please! by division.
400 points, ended October 28, 182 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
What did you think
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Nice images, with an exuberant feel
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thanks
i'm glad people like it
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I like it. It's short, sweet, and to the point. Also youused imagery to describe a soothing scenario and setting. I saw the grass waving in the wind, and shiny happy people (R.E.M. allusion) running through it. Great job. ©KEEP THE INK FLOWING
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i'm happy you like it
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