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Little Red Riding Hood That Didn't End Up So Good.

Once upon a time
there where was a innocent girl in red
She went for a walk through the woods carrying some bananabread on her way to a grandma that was sick in bed.
She thought there was nothing to dread.
Little did she know, she was being stalked by a huge hungry wolf beast.
He wanted her as his feast.
So he came up with a plan being quick on his feet.
He went another way to beat her there.
He tore apart the grandma for a start,
Into little pieces the grandma went her blood was every where.
Than he ate grandmas heart and sliped into her cloths to wait the little red girl.
He didn't have a long wait for there came a gentle tap, tapping on the door.
Soon the show would begin he cleared his throat and in his most girlish voice said please come in.
Soon his lips would be full of Sin.
The little girl walked in.
Grandma she said why is it so dark in here.
Because my dare I have a terrible headache.
Oh my grandma dear is it getting worse your health my fear.
Yes darling I am not well can you come closer so that I may hear you better dear.
Little red moved closer and sat on the bed.
Grandma what big ears you have the better to hear you when your near my dear.
Grandma what big eyes you have the better to see you with.
Grandma what sharp teeth you have the better to eat you with my dear, and he tackled little red.
Ripping her to shreds, her eyes wide with fear yet no one could here her screams.
So she thought however there was a woodsman near by.
He heard the screams of pain.
He choped the door downin it's frame.
But he was too late.
but he would make that wolf pay for blood that was spilt.
He stabbed the wolf in the heart and than his tail.
The woods man had him held down by the ax with a crown as the end.
The woods man took the lantern oil he poured it all over.
He took a match that he had lit it and droped it to the ground.
He watched as Everything burnt to the ground with a frown.
No one would ever know what happend to the little red and her grandma that was sick in bed.
This is the end of Little Red tis a sad day for Fred the woods man that saw nothing but red.

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  • JesskaSlayde
    October 28

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    wow this is beautiful. i love poems that show how things dont always end happily. maybe coz i know what ever i do, life wont end happily.
    anyway, well done


  • Vhoori
    October 28
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    Aww, this is sad. The big bad wolf got what he deserved though, even if Little Red ended up dead.

    Good write!


    Vhoori

  • you did a wonderful job on this Sea.

  • JToddUnderhill
    October 27

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    Bravo....

    ..... This was really well done and should do well in the contest. You have my vote but I am not the judge hope all is well with you, and look forward to reading more!


  • NyteShade
    October 27
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    This took a turn for the worst but I like how you twisted it, it made it all dark. This is like how the grimm brothers would probably do Red Riding Hood. Well done

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