stop up the hourglass
it's running out of fate
the years just feel like days
it's nothing, watch it break
just come undone with me
lets leave it all behind
fall head over heels
run away from time
is it enough to live
is it enough for me
don't you wanna just scream
sometimes its everything
this world makes you go insane
rips apart your scattered brain
but all you really need to do
know someone's goin through it too
yeah yeah yeah
they're goin through
sometimes it's not enough
it's scary in the dark
when no ones there to find you
it's ripping you apart
and all you can see
are the lines that form this place
each window leaves you wanting more
but your thoughts should be erased
is it enough to live
is it enough for me
don't you wanna just scream
sometimes its everything
this world makes you go insane
rips apart your scattered brain
but all you really need to do
know someone's goin through it too
yeah yeah yeah
they're goin through
Author notes
I re-wrote my song "is it enough". This version is completely finished with music and all. However, I reserve the right to change it again at any point 
Comments
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outstanding
I've heard it with the music! It's really excellent. I can't find any flaws. Seriously.
sometimes it's not enough
it's scary in the dark
when no ones there to find you
it's ripping you apart
love that...and also
and all you can see
are the lines that form this place
each window leaves you wanting more
but your thoughts should be erased
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Yep Yep
This one reads very song-like, smoother and nicer rhythm I think as well. Now I can't wait to hear it with the music as well. The second stanza, just come undone with me, is really nice and something that sticks in your head. Good job there Miss Vron - LOVE IT!
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i like the this version better flows a little better
jack
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