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And a......

Thought on existing ephemeral
Each second now regarded eternal
Grave feelings depressing hope
That prosperous thoughts are trying to choke

Contentment just shy of fingertips
Wants and needs of varying degree
Always concious of life’s take on me
A happiness thats between extremes
Not quite knowing solace it seems

Joy now as vital as breath
seconds short of exceeding my best
Repelling any chance of being the rest
First choice benchmarks measured by grain
Desperate to be regarded as sane
And frightened of just being plain

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  • loche
    October 31
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    The character is definitely withdrawn. Good emotion and excellent write.


    • Hustom
      November 3
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      Hope I didn't wreck it for you, I was having trouble figuring out what I was trying to say, it's finished now if you wanted to check it out.