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Stressed

when I get Stressed
my brain locks
and I shut down

when I get Stressed
I get frustrated
with everyone
and my emotions explode
without warning

when I get Stressed
I wish I could stay out
of my own way

when I get Stressed
no one listens
or maybe I just don't want
to hear them

when I am Stressed

I get no where

so maybe, Stressed
shouldn't be my destination

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  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 2

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    I know this feeling. When I get worked up I do not know what to do at times. I love the way you get your feelings out. This was very well put together. Wonderful work here SH


  • songstress80
    October 30

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    i do believe that lots of us have been down the road of stressed before. especially with the way the economy is nowadays. when some people are stressed, they freak out so much that they snap at anybody that happens to even talk to them or look at them. been there, done that. saw the movie, read the book, got the t-shirt...lol! hope you're getting destressed. hope things get better. a great write, even though it's based on negative events.....isn't that sad? go figure! when you're feeling sad, angry, etc. that's when a poet writes some of his/her best works. lol! keep on penning!


  • UncleDunk gold member
    October 28

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    I loved this stanza :

    when I get Stressed
    I wish I could stay out
    of my own way

    May your destination be anywhere but Stressed.