When I arose
Upon this mornings
Sunrise
The mists
That cloaked
And cooled
Replenishing
Everything -
They were cool
To the touch
And warmed nicely
As they slid
Down my skin.
One day gone
As yet another
Begins -
Lingering
Inside & Outside
The walls
With My King!
A contest entry
- The Divine Face of Ecstasy...Semi-Quick quote/image prompt by Blue Rew.
1350 points, ended November 5, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The formatting quite echoes the words and motion
of this piece. The enthusiasm and desire can not be
missed. A pleasure to read, taking in the warm of
new morning filled with bliss. Blue
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I really like the idea of mists sliding down your skin. It's a pretty image.
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Beautiful write!
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very beautiful in thought i like the concept of this poem
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Wooh Hooh , oh but to be a king but for one day!
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Yeah.. what a sweet poem.
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yummmmmmmmmmmmm sounds rather interesting to me lucky man and apart from that it was great as well so yes big hug and a kiss for that one
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........................Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..........Yes, ecstasy.............hmmmmmmm........not just divine............. not juist physical............hmmmmmmmmmm.....I am overcomplicating....
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Do you have something you'd like to say? I admire your poetry a great deal, however, your comments tend to have a current of.....hostility.
ya All~Ways, ~ Jan ~
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SoS
Sorry -- no, not at all. Just got confused , but hostility, absolutely no. Sorry again if that is how it came across
Edward
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It's okay.
Just to me looked like you were commenting on my usual writing & critiquing style, using visual cues and pauses to add different dimensions to whatever it is I'm writing.
Sorry for the misunderstanding!
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A gtreat way to start the day, spend the day and end the day. You prsented this beautifully. The flow is sweet and smooth. What a good mental piecture you have painted in the readers mind, one that will carry one through the day. Thank you for sharing.
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All 3 in one day Might render me speechless.
Much like the statue, lol!
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Nice.....
..... read I hope this does well for you in the challenge. Reminded me of a poem I was wanting to write about a place in California, I might have to work that one through tonight! May your muse forever be with you!
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