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you used to say the same about me

i tell you i love you
i tell you your my world
i tell you i need you
i tell you your my everything

i asked you if you love me you said i dont know
i asked you if i mean anything to you you said i dont know

you used to say the same about me

i was your one love
i was your world
i was needed by you
i was your everything

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  • xxgivin-upxx
    October 28
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    very good,
    love the way it ended, it lets people know what is going on better,


  • HopelessSuicide
    October 28
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    The ending---there is something missing. Foreshadowing is great but try to take it off the cliff.


  • xXemohannahXx
    October 27

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    i liked it, but i would change the ending. you just kind of let it hang like that. but i can kind of relate to it, i went through something a little like it. but other then that, it was good.