Sand between my toes
before I go
pushing myself back,
before gravity takes over.
No inhibitions in
fearless free fall.
Author notes
word prompt: swing
A contest entry
- Quickie [10/20/30] by August Starlight.
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Comments
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I really quite like this a lot even though your language is simple. I don't think I would have ever taken the prompt where you have taken it lol. Thank you so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest.
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I'm glad you liked it, as soon as I saw the word, I took it quite literally haha! Great contest! Thank you for the shiny!
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