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For Danielle and Thomas

When two hearts
combine as one
they twinkle in
the rising sun,

as you take your
wedding vows
let no  sad tears
spoil the wows,

always believe in
a touch of hope
if tough times call
you will forever cope,

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  • nice work

    Very warm wishes to the bride and groom. I like it, well done.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 8

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    Beautifully Sentimental & Heartfelt!!

    Your kindess shows in all you do, Poet!! Thank you for sharing your thoughtful poem with all of us. I'm wishing this happy couple all the best, and good luck in the contest!! Take care now, and keep your muse's quill flowing...
    Peace Always,
    Cyn


  • daviscth silver member
    November 6

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    This poem holds everything that a wedding wish should be. I love the bright and cheerful wishes in the lines. Thank you for taking part.