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hanging emotions from branches
i caught a hold and took advantage.
i told a story that's already been heard.
its grown on me since the first time.
these roots were here when i was a child and i thought we grew together but you're so much bigger and you're so much stronger now.
you will out live me unless they chop you down too.
there is no room here for giants.

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