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Samhains

There by the edge of life

The Ocean waves vanish

Into a pool of calmness

Running slowly back to where

They came from

Against the sands of time

Many moons since time began

She braids

Upon her tapestry a dream

She once had

And still beholds

Within Her loving heart

At Winter time she descents below

To mourn and plea to King

Please let my children free

Our children

She puts His hand upon her breasts

To feel her trembling heart

To feel a Mothers pain and yearning

For she has bled upon birthing

He bends down, upon His knees

To kiss the ground, She walks upon

And bless Her

They are the moon children

My Queen

They come and go

As it fades and fills again

Against the sands of time

And the Ocean waves

Come and vanish

Time and time

Again.

 

 

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  • Aiswarya T Anish
    November 13
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    A lot of meaning...My favourite lines are

    "Against the sands of time
    Many moons since time began"

    So beautiful and caught my attention!

    Aishu


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 11
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    beautiful write with such a deep meaning and sadness


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 3

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    such a dream of beauty you have penned inside your heart..for you dear souls are a dreamer..smiled in wisdom of heart.. I love the words you have penned .. for they are part of how you are in heart.. hugs always hun Angel♥♥


  • Jalalbad gold member
    November 1

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    lovely, sounds like a sad fairy tale. I like the way you wrote this


  • Melissa Burns
    October 30

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    Where do I start? This is a truly beautiful piece, I really enjoyed reading it and it's been a really, really long time since I've read something that I've wanted to read again. Thank you!

    ....She puts His hand upon her breasts

    To feel her trembling heart

    To feel a Mothers pain and yearning

    For she has bled upon birthing.....


    Beautiful!!!!


  • lovlilmystery
    October 29

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    WOW!!!! Totally awesome piece. This is by far, one of the best I have read. I believe, you have outdone yourself, Nick. It is so beautiful. As I was reading the piece, I could actually visualize everything. The words were so well put together and flowed so, nicely. Maybe with time, I will be able to put something like this together. Thank you, so much for sharing an amazing poem. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi

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