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just another peice of paper

just another peice of paper
flying in the wind
another peice of paper
forgoten and lonely
going where ever the wind takes it
never touching earth
avoiding trees
hiding its face
showing no one whats written
between the lines
letting no one dig deep enough
to solve the riddles
enscribed in ancient writing
buring its secrets
deep with in the folds
never letting just anybody in
no!

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k this is about a realy good freind of mine its a metiphor thingy i think its called

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  • Lowell Poe
    October 27

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    First..i thought it funny that the person site name below was ironic since the poem was about apiece of paper


    just another piece of paper
    flying in the wind
    another piece of paper
    forgotten and lonely
    going where ever the wind takes it
    never touching earth
    avoiding trees
    hiding its face
    showing no one whats written
    between the lines.

    you painted a picture here for me....
    there is a place in town...a culdesac ....there is always one piece of paper blowing up and around it seems... ...never getting caught in tress.....
    this piece brought that to life ....
    had a free feeling.....
    very good lass...
    i enjoy your work so little gypsy....
    you bring such joy to me lass....

    bless you always,
    Liam