I am fully aware of your eyes,
Fixed on the bare patch of skin on my back
My evanescent silhouette, all that’s left of me,
Except for these dusty bones, breaking,
under the strength of your ignorance
A contest entry
- QUICKIE... lotta dang points by T.o.r.t.u.r.e..
2600 points, ended October 28, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
http://xbluepearlx.deviantart.com/art/Solitude-124923584
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i like the words you use. alot. thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
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I entered that contest as well.
that's an amazing take on the prompt and you've probably horribly defeated my chances at winning.
"My evanescent silhouette, all that’s left of me, "
-- stunning imagery.
good luck. -
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Thank you. =)
But I read your poem, and I think you have first dibs on the gold trophy place, trust me. -
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lol ehh, thanks though.
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