I loved you then
I love you now
I'll love you forever
This I vow
I'll be here forever
Just waiting for you
Whether you know it or not
I swear this is true
I miss those days
You spent with me
Those summer days
Beneath that old tree
But then you were gone
You moved far away
I wanted to go too
But here I would stay
You promised you'd come back
You promised you'd still care
But I'm here all alone
Life doesn't seem fair
I still remember you
I still love you
And to this day
I'm still waiting for you
Author notes
ok, this isn't one of my best works, so sorry...but I rather like it. I hope you like it too!!!
Alicia Lynn and Sophie Lynn
oops! I forgot!!! this song was inspired by the song "I'll Be Right Here Waiting For You" by Bryan Adams.
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p12string
I really enjoyed this one..I can relate a lot to this..Great job!!!!!!
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Great flow. some syllable differences but that is ok. please put your song in the author notes. Thnks. best of luck and continue writing.
WREN -
Here is your song.
Congrats!!! I'm glad that your life is going amazing that is positively wonderful. Try I will be right here waiting for you by: Bryan Adams. You will be number 14. Here is your link.... http://artists.let ssingit.com/bryan-adams-lyrics-i-will-be-right-here-waiting-for-you-9x39343. You can find the song itsself at rhapsody, playlist, or letssingit. All are .com. Best of luck!
Yours
WREN -
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awesome!!! I love this song! thanks! I'll write this poem as soon as I can!
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