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Exciting Fantasies

Excite me, with fantasies
My mind lingers in the sound of your name
Drunk at the sight of you
I let my mind wander through my dreams,

Trembling;
I refuse to set you free,
Bound to my bed, I want to hear you scream,
It’s your struggle that excites me,

Wandering,
With a quick simple tease,
Fingers, Lips and Teeth,
I feel you arch up, as you beg me to please

Moaning,
Giving you breathless ecstasy,
Now I know you feel me,
Our bodies close and our hearts beating fast,
Let me kiss you, with one last gasp…

Damn me for exciting fantasies….

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  • Dulcima
    November 11
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    Damn you for exciting fantasies :)

    That was beautifully evocative, summoning a sensual image of lovers enjoying one another. Thank you for the read.

  • Bruce silver member
    October 28

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    This is really good, especially stanzas two and three because you paint such a vivid picture of your dreams: You show us and we see! Terrific write!


  • SilentPoetress
    October 28
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    Exciting and very delicious. Great poem. Good luck in the contest.


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    October 27
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    Filth and madness combined makes a woman dangerous


  • fallendust
    October 27

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    Wow this was fabulous! I loved every word. You are a very talented writer I must add. Thank you so much for your entry for it has brightened my day!!! I love where you said "breathless ecstacy!" That is absolutely divine. The ending is perfect...."Damn me for exciting fantasies!!!" I am in awe
    Thank you again for your entry!
    SIncerely,
    Sarah

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