As the river calmly downstream churning.
Foliage of the trees is starting to fall colors turning.
Rays of sunshine through the tree lines.
Shadows dancing right over the river side.
Soon nighttime will become moonlight.
A different ray to calm all life.
Author notes
prompt: calm. JackReed3...
A contest entry
- one day ;; contest by Kathraina.
575 points, ended November 10, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Stunning write! I really love the simplicity of this piece, each line flows so elegantly. Marvelous job with this write
bravo and thank you for entering
♥ kate -
Sublime!
Extremely romantic!!! This was an absolutely beautiful job!!!!!!
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Beatiful. =]
My favorite is the last
two lines. This brings such
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Ahh, yes, so soothing Nice write!
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This poem is very calming. I love the imagery you used, and I really do appreciate the use of contrast, balance and nature. Congrats on this piece, keep on writing
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really beautiful. i like the image you painted here. i can really visualize it. good job!! and good luck
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you know Jack This is just splended write,
and so calming you did great on the
prompt! and your words are just perfect!
love and blessings
Rend
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