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Unknown Baby Girl

She is officially here
yet I can never see
my baby niece so dear
it's such a tragedy.

I cant help but to cry
when I see her photo
I sit and wonder why
my sister is such a hoe.

My nieces will never know
they have a baby sister
I think their eyes would glow
but it turned into a twister.

I will never get to see
the unknown baby girl
that could bring me glee
but gave me a down swirl.

October 27 of 2009
was the day she was born
to a world of crime
and such hateful scorn.

for my beautiful niece that I'll never get to meet due to my sister sleeping around and giving her up for adoption {she's with a better family though}

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  • That was BEAUTIFUL!!!


  • ForeverRenee
    November 3
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    wow, i cried, well crying

    ~Renee

  • YungFreck
    November 2
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    Nice

    It was heartfelt


  • aadi
    October 30
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    Oh so sorry, lovely poem tho, I'd say that's a 10 outa 10.

  • Bruce silver member
    October 28
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    Oh, this is heartbreaking hun! I'm so sorry. You have written a good poem though and feel what you are feeling!


  • MJ Forgives
    October 27
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    I am sorry about that sis . Yeah she is in a better family. I can feel your pain. I love you ! Love and Peace!
    -Jess

  • Bob Fox
    October 27
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    poet

    nothing i could ever say to this.... tears now

  • Awe! This is so sad. I'm so sorry. I hope she's with some people that will care for her dearly. My best friend is having a baby and she said I am going to be like an Aunt to her. Her name is Sophie Lynn. Just remember that God will take care of her. I hope you are well. Keep up the good work.

    ~Kayla


  • andywontdie silver member
    October 27

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    Man that really does blow, you should adopt her damnit. Well I wish you all the best in the world and hope that something good comes of this.


  • Syko Path
    October 27
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    awe im sorry

    im going to have a neice soon

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