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Hemophiliacs & Hypochondriacs

Can you recollect the last time you had enough?
Where the best idea you had all day was to snuff
yourself out and you'd sit there and daydream about it.

Well, I personally just had it
It felt right, but I wish it hadn't
Maybe I'll just wait until tomorrow.

I can't sleep, it's now day two
And I don't know what to do
So, I'll sit here and type blindly
Hoping that everything will work out kindly

Not finished, I've lost interest in writing it right now.

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