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There in your arms

I hate where you are,
when you drive in our car,
with her...

is she the one
The one close to you?
does she whisper hello,
and tell you how much she's missed you
because I'm in love with you...
and there's no place i'd rather be
but there...
in your arms

as your cheeks brush,
and when your lips touch,
i wish to be her...
there in your arms

because I'm in love-in love with you
and can't let go -let go of us
i wish to be there... in your arms

where are cheeks can brush,
and our lips can touch,
But your with her... there

is she the one,
the one close to you?
does she whisper hello,
and tell you how much she's missed you?
because I'm love with you
and there's no place i'd rather be
but there... in in your arms

there in your arms...




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i really enjoyed writing this
Here in your arms- by hellogoodbye

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  • LavendeRFlameS
    October 27

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    Here In Your Arms - Hellogoodbye.

    Let me know if you want me to change the song, can change it once.
    Take it in any way that you like.

    Hope you enjoy