feelings, feelings
where do they come from
where do the originate?
our beliefs, good or bad
about ourselves, about another;
feelings and sensations, we generate
the heart follows the mind
the mind chases the heart
the weaving thread from heart to head
dives into the subconscious and surfaces again
with past forgotten thoughts and emotions
our long lost attitudes and devotions
derived from both the ego and the soul
the heart senses vibes of self and others
the mind reacts to the sensations
the mind taps into the consensus
it’s all intricately tied together
reverberating in the hidden realms
of mind and emotions
sensing is believing
believing creates what is sensed
the emotional-mental circle is complete
the mind chases the heart
the heart follows the mind
In a list
A contest entry
- BWOM~~Best Write Of The Month~~#7 by islekine.
1050 points, ended November 1, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Profound and wise...
Stimulating Ping-Pong of words on the poetic table... "Mind-Heart Circle" plays the facts and sings the deeds. An inspiring composition.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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I always enjoy your poems!
We think a lot alike..
I look forward to your message each week!
Thanks for your continued support of our contests! Best wishes always!
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Great depth - so true the mind chases the heart, and the heart follows the mind. Endless circle of emotions...
nicely done
thank you for your entry
best wishes in the contest
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I love reading this poem and i think i will read this agian because its bgrilliant
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I agree it is a never ending cycle; the heart and the mind, I often ponder the relationship between these two, using them in poems, often conversing with one another, arguing...
Frankly, I don't know where feelings originate or rather what has given us the capacity to feel, do we come into the world with them?
Thought provoking my friend
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the cycle
we are so led, following and leading and following
the mind chases the heart
the heart follows the mind
we never stop the cycle long enough to see
very well done Bonita
God bless you my friend...
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You hit the target right on. 'we never stop the cycle long enough to see'. - Bonita
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