Please, be not afraid,
for all my faults,
I really am most agreeable,
Ah, I dost see that I hast amused thee,
thou doth presume me arrogant,
that an ancient creature
such as I wouldst dare to postulate
that I couldst maketh thee anxious.
Thou really art most beautiful, my dear
and dare I say it, so very brave.
That thou couldst return’eth
in light of that which wouldst
be so awful to thine eyes.
Prithey tell my lady,
Couldst thou find forgiveness
in thy broken heart for this soul
that wouldst be so very black to thee?
Couldst thou forego an eternity
of bitter pathos and sate
thy boiling rage in dreams
of better futurities?
Time is fleeting,
lifetimes so brief in their passing,
shining bright afore they snuff
to eternal darkness,
eclipsed in a twilight ballet
of amaranthine chimeras.
I offer thee immortality, my love
for thou art so very far from average.
Thy bluster so breezy
as to beguile my heart,
enchant mine eyes,
bespell my soul.
Thou dost walk a bumpy path,
so broad yet so long
with such vitality
and allure that thou doth
stir my passions so…
I beseech thee
in my adoration of thee…
I wouldst sire thee…
What sayeth thee, dear lady?
Author notes
Prompt: Wordbank (Used them all)
afraid, agreeable, amused, ancient, anxious arrogant, average, awful, beautiful, better bitter, black, boiling, brave, breezy, brief bright, broad, broken, bumpy
As its coming up to Halloween, thought I'd go with a Vampyre write... 
BG: Poze_Gotice_de_Groaza from Google images...
A contest entry
- Adjective Word Bank #2 by GotLilt.
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Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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This is morbidly, romantically, out-of-the-box different, yada yada.
The is a wonderful use of the word bank. Bravo! -
Beautiful!
I love the dark romance
and the Archaic language
is always enchanting...
Thanks for sharing and best wishes
in the contest!
Pastel
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Oh bro this is amazing
I have so missed reading your writes.
The wordage and story line of this peice is beautiful
as always you amaze me
you are a true talent
Keep the ink flowing
fire
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That's really cool dear
I get what it is about though I don't onderstand that old language well
It's a great piece
If I ever meet a vamyr I would ask him to bite me these souls are so great
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well done as alawys my friend
nice vamp write indeed
love these lines...
Time is fleeting,
lifetimes so brief in their passing,
shining bright afore they snuff
to eternal darkness,
eclipsed in a twilight ballet
of amaranthine chimeras.
good luck to you in the contest
thanks for the share
Darky
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mmmm ok
first impression....i just wana smack you in the face....coz i know that as you wrote this you most likely had patrick stewert going through your head...well maybe.....
word play wasnt quite right but you gave it your best i can see.....
naa just kidding dude.....
this is awesome...i enjoyed it from start to finish....
loved this bit....
I beseech thee
in my adoration of thee…
I wouldst sire thee…
What sayeth thee, dear lady?
this is great as always dude....
keep it up....and keep on the pain killers.......hehehehehehehe
love Jayde
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oooo, i love the vampyre, so flamboyunt, very evocative write!
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