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Ifferisms

If you have never said hi
I would still have been lost

If we were still talking
We wouldn't be laughing at crying

If you have never said that word
My heart would not have bled

If you were still alive
We would have ended it

Author notes

The term Ifferism was coined by Dr. M. Grothe.
just trying to release some of the pain. intentionally meant to be vague.

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  • Virgoan
    November 17
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    I can feel the clarity of pain. The second couplet pulled me away. What I really like about this piece is that all couplets stands on its own at par.

    All in all, a short and vibrant piece.


    Thanks and regards,

    Hensley