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Displaced

He is displaced
it is written all over his face
dripping from sad eyes
life holds no surprise

Please call social services
cart him away from your life
dump him at the curb
watching him fold inward disturbed

Emailing disconnected siblings
wondering how to reach
without a prepared speech
trying to bridge a faulty breach

But he is quite aware of his surroundings
seeing everything through blue eyes
going to make his own stand
crush the fakeness
from their outstretched hands

Sure they will read this
maybe come around
or forever resist
adding them all to his 'write-off' list

It was you
with soothing words
buried in niceties
yet crawling thoroughly with dirt

Hard to believe
he once looked up to her
but reality tends to fade
cherished memories end up burned






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written 10/26/09

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  • Wearealldead
    October 27
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    wow thats sad u know


    • MathiasThom
      October 28
      Edit | Reply
      thanks for commenting. It's sad, but there's a line of Optimism in there somewhere!