Legendary likeable lusty luscious Laura
led a life of lazy leisure and libertarian
luxury literally leaving latterly a
lewd lapse, living a languidly lascivious
libertine lacklustre lucrative life
lamentably lowering Laura’s lesser
local licentious, lubricious lifestyle
and lustrous loose luxuriant livelihood
a lack of lingual literacy and a
lamentable lapse looming large in local
licit lawmaking lifestyle litigation.
Author notes
prompt no. 8
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- Brevity. by Naridill.
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Comments
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likeable, little literary lyric!
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I applaud the attempt to create a full piece alliteration. I felt in most places it felt more like a tongue twister than a poem. In saying that - I have only ever seen one person achieve what you have tried well. Goodluck.
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Naridill
Many Thanks for your kind comments on "Lusty Laura" I have already written a half a dozen alliteration poems my first being "Alliteration Indeed" and a funny one called "The Wind Society" thanks again for your interest.....Peace and hugs.....George
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that was actually pretty cool. i would never be able to even think up all those l words. i applaud you just because this poem is friggin crazy good job.
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