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Magical kiss

 

 

 

not that i was looking,

peace found me on it's own

enriched my life

in your heart i found my home.

 

 

in silence your soul spoke to me

every word so clear

embrance in a lovers dance

our spirit, carefree

 

 

it was love that i needed

freely heaven you gave

a kiss that brought my life, alive

my dying soul you saved.

 

 

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  • MaximusPrimeRib
    October 27

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    Nice.

    The most lasting, enduring kind of love, is the love that finds us...rather than the other way around. Well done, you, for allowing.

  • Love is often found when we are not looking for it - lovely words here


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 27

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    Another beautifully written piece from you my friend! I love the emotions and passion in your words. I hope that you are well and thanks for sharing your talent with all of us here! Take care!




    Jeremy0826


  • lullabyegurl
    October 27

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    awww this is soo cutee youare realy talentedd (L) xx

  • this is really lovely. You are blessed to be able to feel this way and find such peace in a relationship. I lovely write, well structured but heartfelt and genuine. I love the emotion in it and the honesty. I particularly love the first two lines 'not that i was looking,peace found me on it's own'. Well done!!!


  • justgot2loveme
    October 27

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    very sweet, it is such a blessing to live a life with this kind of love,
    your words are so tender, soft, and loving. you heart speaks so clearly
    in your beautiful poem. you have something that many only dream of.

    justgot2loveme


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 27

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    This is just truly beautiful, my dear friend!
    I love this and the emotions and feelings it envokes
    I wish you and your honey many, many years of love and laughter!
    All the best!
    Sandy

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