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My First Time

I'm on my knees
It's there before me
His cock
At least 7", so hard
Pre cum glistens in the morning light
I hesitate
I have not done this before
I take it in my hand
Draw back his foreskin
Leaning forward, I stick out my tongue
I lick the end of of his cock
My tongue seeks the slit
I taste
I like
My lips surround its head
As I continue
To lick
To suck
My mouth slides down the shaft
Its all in my mouth
Feels good
I like
Right hand holds base
Mouth slides up and down the shaft
Up and down
Faster
Up and down
Faster
I feel it start to jerk
He moans
He cums
Hits back of throat
I swallow
Good
I continue to lick, to suck
His cock is clean
I sit back satisfied
Can't wait till next time

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  • Galaxy2
    November 2, 2009
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    Wow...
    First time experience is always cherishing.
    'Pre-cum glistens in the morning light'...What a delightful line!